1st paper

I thought the first paper was pretty difficult.  Even after the meeting with you i am still a little unsure of exactly what you want.  I also think that the peer review that we did was kind of a waste of time.  I would have much rather have had someone actually read my paper and give me compliments or criticism on it instead of giving a group of people a general idea of what our paper is about and tell them to analyze it from the little information they have.  I thought one thing that was nice was getting to meet with you and have you look over our paper.  This answered some of my question about what you wanted.  But after turning this first paper and getting it returned i will have a better idea of what you are looking for.